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Pink Oni and a Doughnut by Captain-By-Moonlight Pink Oni and a Doughnut by Captain-By-Moonlight
Drew this to test some recording settings still having probs 
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the work with the color is good, i enjoy the combinations a lot. although, the green is a bit unsaturated, and could've been better with just a tiny bit more of saturation. i like the situation and pose, but a cleaner work would've been a bit more enjoyable.

your anatomy seems to be good, but some practice and study of it will make it better! i really do enjoy her eyes and what's going on. i enjoy the flowers a lot, though maybe the white outline was unnecesary.

overall, you've a good color perception, but more color study could've made a stronger impact on the viewer.

that's all, keep practicing!
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Okay! I'm going to actually write a critique.

There are some upfront issues right away- when I first saw this I had no idea what it was, my eyes couldn't focus in any certain area and I had to open the page and take a better look, but even then, it's hard on the eyes. I can't focus on the face or anywhere else because of the extreme bright contrast. The two colors can be used well but I almost feel as if it's too solid on one another and executed poorly that it's not exactly working color wise, it hurts the eyes.

However, focusing my gaze on the face, it's very nicely drawn! it gives that certain aesthetic vibe that fits the drawing, it works with the vibe that's being given off from the body pose and the general style... however I honestly find it hard to focus on the face for long, once again, the background.

The anatomy is much better than mine, I can say that right now. The waist and upper body feels fine to me, it gives that bodily shape that shows off 'chubby' and 'cute'. The one thing that bothers me a bit is that the leg behind the pointed out limb seems a bit stretched, it's coming out of the body as though it's longer or kind of out of place, especially looking at the other thigh and body shape overall.

However, This is nice! The anatomy is bounds ahead of me and it's not something that you can outright "complain" about, it's past the point of "I see this, that's an issue!" i more went "Wow, that looks good!" I also like the way the hair is drawn, the ends of it really draw me in.

In conclusion;
Work on the color combinations a bit because it is very hard and disorienting on the eyes, a bit of deeper anatomy fixing would be good, but overall this isn't what you could call 'bad' whatsoever, keep it up!
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Aster1os Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Weird, but fun :D
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Angela-Narish Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
(*・ω・)ノ it's something special! I've never seen somethink like this before
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Quicil Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Professional General Artist
o god my eyes
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Theadventureracoon Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017  Student Digital Artist
That is a lovely style! Nice colors!!
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2017
That's cute! Like the colours :)
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Aja-mi Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
i love the color combination, it's just stunning! *W*
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PICB0T Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2017  Student General Artist
Aww, I love the colors!
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Captain-By-Moonlight Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017  Student Interface Designer
o// u //o

shit thanks m8
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Natsu-Lu Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Strange and... cute)))
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DwainesWorld101 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Cool :P
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Zayarts Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
nice job. I would definitely start studying anatomy more though.
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Captain-By-Moonlight Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2017  Student Interface Designer
Indeed, I still have a long way to go haha : D
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preposterous-panda Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very cool, I love the colors
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Tanzanight Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017
Love the contrast of colors and how fluid your line is. The crown and the hair frame her face beautifully!
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Arasteia Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh I really like this style! It's kind of painterly and it's really eyecatching :D I love the colours too :) 
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Captain-By-Moonlight Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Student Interface Designer
thanks a bunch :)
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Arasteia Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! 
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